Show Not Tell Writing!..

SHOW NOT TELL!...

Angry!..

Emily Started to roll her eye's. A red started to appear on her face. She would go into her room, punch her face on her pillow and start to scream.  As her sister Laura came to apologize Laura could hear Emily stomp her feet and slammed the door in front of Laura’s Face.

Nervous!..

Keri’s palm’s started to sweat. Doubts started to appear in her mind. She felt like running away from her netbook trial but she knew is she did she will be ready. The teacher who was taking the netball trial called Keri to go on the court because it’s her turn. Goosebumps started to grow on her skin