My Mihimihi

Kia ora Koutou

Greetings to you all

Kua hui mai nei

Who have gathered here

Ki tenei kura

to this school

Ki te mau mai

To bring

i nga whakaaro pai

The good thoughts

Ka nui te koa

Great is the happiness

mo to koutou kaha

For your support

Ke te haere mai

In coming

Ke te ako

To learn

i te reo Maori

The Maori Language

e pa ana ki tenei kura

Concerning this school     

  

My First Day Of School!

1st Draft

Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day at school. From looking at our writing we are go to set some writing goals for the term.

“ Wake up Mele it is time for your first day of school” My Mum said. As got ready I had butterflies in my stomach feel scared. Nervously Walking to school thinking to myself “ What will my teacher be like.” Going through the gates “Come on Mele we got to go to the office and see what class you're in” Mum said in a charming voice.

We got to the office “ Hi I have just come to see what class Mele is in” As Mum spoke. “ Mele Is in room 1” The office Lady answered. Off We went to go and check out my new class. Getting near room 1 My eyes started cry out tears “ Mum can you please stay in class with me” As I sadly replied. “Yes I will just for a little bit” Mum Smiling as she answered.

Walking into class as my tears dripped to the floor “ Ok class we have a new student with us today and her name is Mele” As my new teacher explained to the class. I  slowly walked to hang my bag up and sat next to my Mum.

As the Teacher was telling the class what to do I looked around the class and suddenly saw something interesting “Mum why is there a car and a plane stuck together?” Speaking while looking at the picture. Maybe because they existed all time ago” Mum said. “Oh”.

As the teacher was finishing what he had to say he said “Everyone lets hop in a circle and say each others name so Mele gets to know all of you's. As everyone introduced himself it was my turn next and I felt scared so I stood up and hid behind my Mum. “Mele is it your turn” As mum said. “ I am Mele and I am 5” As I quietly said. So The teacher told me her Name “ Hi everyone I am Miss George and I am going to be your teacher for the rest of the year.

2nd Draft

Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day at school. From looking at our writing we are go to set some writing goals for the term.

“ Wake up Mele it is time for your first day of school,” my Mum said. As I got ready I had butterflies in my stomach, feeling scared. With nervous excitement I skipped along the foot path ahead of Mum “Mum Hurry” Getting near the school gates thinking to myself “ What will my teacher be like.”

Getting near the office my Mum spoke“ Hi I have just come to see what class Mele is in”? “ Mele Is in room 1” The office Lady answered. Off We went Slowly to see what my new class will be like. Getting near room 1 my hand holding mom's hand tight and my eyes started cry out tears “ Mum can you please stay in class with me” As I sadly replied. “Yes I will just for a little bit” Mum Smiling as she answered.

Walking into class as my tears dripped to the floor “ Ok class we have a new student with us today and her name is Mele” As my new teacher explained to the class. I  slowly walked to hang my bag up and sat next to my Mum.

As the Teacher was telling the students what to do my sadly look around the class and suddenly saw something interesting “Mum why is there a car and a plane stuck together?” Speaking while looking at the picture. Maybe because they existed all time ago” Mum said. “Oh”.

As the teacher was finishing the final touches of what he had to say he said “Before we go off to do some writing lets all hop in a circle and say each others name so Mele gets to know all of yous and Me”. As everyone introduced himself it was my turn next and I felt scared so I stood up and hid behind my Mum. “Mele is it your turn” As mum said. “ I am Mele and I am 5” As I quietly said. So The teacher told me her Name “ Hi everyone I am Miss George and I am going to be your teacher for the rest of the year.

Getting use to the class my mum leaves without me knowing. “Hi I am Taamai” as Taamai said. “Come and sit with us on the blue table and we can all work to together and help one another”. “Ok” I said cheerfully. Sitting down at the blue table with my news friends along came Sisilia. “Hi I am Sisilia” As Sisilia replied “Hi I am Mele”. As were doing writing suddenly the bell rang so off we went to eat our morning tea.

Finishing off my last bit of food “Come Mele come and play tiggy on the park with Me ,Sisilia, Gianna and Raeleen”. As Taamai cheerfully said to me. Playing tiggy on the park remembering that today was only a half a day I made the most of it. half an hour later hearing the bell ring running to class waiting for my teacher “ We are related did you know that” Sisilia said. “ you look familiar” I answered.

As Mrs George came to open the door I ran in the class sat on the mat so I could get a sticker from her. “We are going to do some maths now so lets count from 1 to 20” Said Mrs George. “1,2,3,4,5......” as all the kids were shouting. A Little while laters suddenly the bell rang home time. Seeing my mum waiting for me outside I ran to her and gave her a big hug. I can’t wait until tomorrow.

My Weekends !

On Sunday morning I woke up and all I could see was the sun shining on me. “It is going to be a hot sunny day today” I said to my little sister. When I got out of bed I walked outside and all I could see was my cousins playing hand ball. “ I'm playing with you guys” I yelled. When I jumped in line my cousin Piriniha whacked the ball and won. Then it was my turn. I challenged him because he was King.

As we were playing I told him to go easy on me because I wasn't that good and I didn't know how to play properly. As the ball was coming towards me I whacked the ball as hard as I could and skimmed Piriniha out. “You said no skimming!” yelled Piriniha. “I don’t know how to skim but you can be king because I'm going inside” I said.  “Shot Mele you better come outside” said Piriniha. “I will” I replied.

When I went inside all I could hear was my little sister so I went into my Mom's room and grabbed her.  Me and My little sister Tatiana went to the lounge and put on my movie. The movie we first watched was Honey 2. During the movie I remembered that my cousins were waiting for me outside so I went outside and told them to come inside.

When they came inside they kept on talking while I was trying to watch the movie so I told them to be quiet. A little while later their heads were in the zone of the movie but my head wasn't because my baby sister wouldn't stop crying. So I went to the kitchen, made her a bottle and put it into a bowl with cold water and waited for the water to cool down. When the bottle was warm I wrapped my little sister in a blanket and put the bottle in her mouth.

When she fell asleep I put her in bed and as I walked into the lounge the movie was finished so I went outside with my cousins and played handball. As we were playing it was getting hot so I asked my cousins if they wanted to go to the pools and they did. I went back inside again I got my stuff ready then told my Mum that I was going when I left.

My cousin was next door because that was where they lived so I went to there house to see if they were ready? When I got there they were still putting their stuff in there bags so I just sat in my aunt's room and watched T.V.  When they were all done we all walked to the pools and when we got there we just walked in because the pools were free.

When we walked through the door we all went to get change in our togs but I didn't because I don’t really want to swim. When they were all done they put their bags by me and jumped into the pool, “ Why aren't you swimming”? yelled Piriniha from the other side of the pool.  “I don't really want to swim but I might swim after” “You better”.

I was getting bored So I went to the changing room got changed and jumped into the cold pool. As I was swimming my cousin’s jumped on my back and tried to drown me but he couldn't. After we finished swimming we all got changed and went home. When I got home I was tired so I had a shower and went to sleep for school tomorrow.

My story baord

Someone grabs the ball out of the shed then bounces it to her/him. Then she/he catchs the ball and shots it into the hoop. When it come's though the hoop suddenly it turns into chocolate.