My First Day Of School!

1st Draft

Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day at school. From looking at our writing we are go to set some writing goals for the term.

“ Wake up Mele it is time for your first day of school” My Mum said. As got ready I had butterflies in my stomach feel scared. Nervously Walking to school thinking to myself “ What will my teacher be like.” Going through the gates “Come on Mele we got to go to the office and see what class you're in” Mum said in a charming voice.

We got to the office “ Hi I have just come to see what class Mele is in” As Mum spoke. “ Mele Is in room 1” The office Lady answered. Off We went to go and check out my new class. Getting near room 1 My eyes started cry out tears “ Mum can you please stay in class with me” As I sadly replied. “Yes I will just for a little bit” Mum Smiling as she answered.

Walking into class as my tears dripped to the floor “ Ok class we have a new student with us today and her name is Mele” As my new teacher explained to the class. I  slowly walked to hang my bag up and sat next to my Mum.

As the Teacher was telling the class what to do I looked around the class and suddenly saw something interesting “Mum why is there a car and a plane stuck together?” Speaking while looking at the picture. Maybe because they existed all time ago” Mum said. “Oh”.

As the teacher was finishing what he had to say he said “Everyone lets hop in a circle and say each others name so Mele gets to know all of you's. As everyone introduced himself it was my turn next and I felt scared so I stood up and hid behind my Mum. “Mele is it your turn” As mum said. “ I am Mele and I am 5” As I quietly said. So The teacher told me her Name “ Hi everyone I am Miss George and I am going to be your teacher for the rest of the year.

2nd Draft

Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day at school. From looking at our writing we are go to set some writing goals for the term.

“ Wake up Mele it is time for your first day of school,” my Mum said. As I got ready I had butterflies in my stomach, feeling scared. With nervous excitement I skipped along the foot path ahead of Mum “Mum Hurry” Getting near the school gates thinking to myself “ What will my teacher be like.”

Getting near the office my Mum spoke“ Hi I have just come to see what class Mele is in”? “ Mele Is in room 1” The office Lady answered. Off We went Slowly to see what my new class will be like. Getting near room 1 my hand holding mom's hand tight and my eyes started cry out tears “ Mum can you please stay in class with me” As I sadly replied. “Yes I will just for a little bit” Mum Smiling as she answered.

Walking into class as my tears dripped to the floor “ Ok class we have a new student with us today and her name is Mele” As my new teacher explained to the class. I  slowly walked to hang my bag up and sat next to my Mum.

As the Teacher was telling the students what to do my sadly look around the class and suddenly saw something interesting “Mum why is there a car and a plane stuck together?” Speaking while looking at the picture. Maybe because they existed all time ago” Mum said. “Oh”.

As the teacher was finishing the final touches of what he had to say he said “Before we go off to do some writing lets all hop in a circle and say each others name so Mele gets to know all of yous and Me”. As everyone introduced himself it was my turn next and I felt scared so I stood up and hid behind my Mum. “Mele is it your turn” As mum said. “ I am Mele and I am 5” As I quietly said. So The teacher told me her Name “ Hi everyone I am Miss George and I am going to be your teacher for the rest of the year.

Getting use to the class my mum leaves without me knowing. “Hi I am Taamai” as Taamai said. “Come and sit with us on the blue table and we can all work to together and help one another”. “Ok” I said cheerfully. Sitting down at the blue table with my news friends along came Sisilia. “Hi I am Sisilia” As Sisilia replied “Hi I am Mele”. As were doing writing suddenly the bell rang so off we went to eat our morning tea.

Finishing off my last bit of food “Come Mele come and play tiggy on the park with Me ,Sisilia, Gianna and Raeleen”. As Taamai cheerfully said to me. Playing tiggy on the park remembering that today was only a half a day I made the most of it. half an hour later hearing the bell ring running to class waiting for my teacher “ We are related did you know that” Sisilia said. “ you look familiar” I answered.

As Mrs George came to open the door I ran in the class sat on the mat so I could get a sticker from her. “We are going to do some maths now so lets count from 1 to 20” Said Mrs George. “1,2,3,4,5......” as all the kids were shouting. A Little while laters suddenly the bell rang home time. Seeing my mum waiting for me outside I ran to her and gave her a big hug. I can’t wait until tomorrow.