My poem

Where I'm from I see people diving off slimy rocks into the sea like a mermaid

I feel cold sand washing over my feet as I peacefully strolled up and down the beach

The chilly breeze blows my hair like a hair dryer giving me goose bumps

I hear laughter over my shoulder from people on the beach running after each other, squealing happily

I smell delicious burgers looked back, My family munchy gracefully

As I was eating Birds were circling us as if they were our security guard’s

This is an example of my Alliteration:Where I'm from I can hear my brother and sister stomping to the beats of their hip hop music.

This is an example of my rhyme:I can smell strong Links mixed with the straightener and lime wax sister and brother getting ready to go out.

I see my sister and brother doing their hair and getting ready to go out.

I see my Little brother on the computer playing on grand theft auto.

I see my baby sister in her jolly jumper happy.

I see my Mum Making dinner and watching tv.

I can smell Links mixed with the straightener and wax.

I can smell my Mum cooking curry chicken and rice.

I can smell Soap,conditioner and shampoo coming from the bathroom.

I can smell Chocolate and soda from a distance.

I can hear my little sister crying for a bottler.

I can hear the jug on so someone could may make their coffee.

I can hear my little sister and brother fighting.

I can hear my brother stomping on the floor to his music.

I can taste perfume in my mouth and soap.

I can taste hairspray and burnt hair.

I can taste delicious Milk and oreo.

I  can taste Peanut butter with jam in a bread.