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Friday, February 18, 2011

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On Sunday I went to the big day out. I went with my auntie and uncle and all my cousins. There is a beach across the road from the big day out, so we had a swim (at the beach) with my cousins.
At the big day out there was a park and a stage where people sang. I could hear the songs playing while I was at the beach. I said to my cousins, "Don't go far because you will drown." I swam with them and it was not deep for us.We were all girls and we made friends.
The day stopped at 6.00pm. I made balls with uad like mudball's .After that I went home The end.
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14 comments:

  1. saronaMarch 2, 2011 at 2:45 PM

    hi mele i hope to see your pincher.

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  2. Room14March 7, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    hi mele i hope u had a great time at the beach
    by chloe

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  3. saronaMarch 8, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    hi mele .i hope that you had a grate time at the beach with your cosines at the beach. i liked your pincher about the beach and your sand.

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  4. porschaMarch 8, 2011 at 10:39 AM

    Hi Mele, that was a really good story that you wrote and a really good picture.There is some good detail in your picture.Really good work and thank you for the comment on my blog...

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  5. porschaMarch 8, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    Hi Mele thank you for commenting me.
    And yes some of my y family lives at christchurch but not not in canterbury okay bye.

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  6. hayleyMarch 8, 2011 at 2:48 PM

    Hi Mele I like your story it had detail. I wish that I could come one day but I cant.

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  7. efilonaMarch 8, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    HI Mele your family was so fun because they went to the beach. When I go to the beach with my family we swim and we have fish and chips.

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  8. Miss LavakulaMarch 8, 2011 at 4:45 PM

    Hi Mele,
    I have finally found your blog! Your blog looks amazing and it's great to see you have put up some awesome posts about what you did in the holidays. I'm glad you had a great holiday. I can't wait to see what else you will post.

    Love Miss Lavakula

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  9. sesalina MOKOIMarch 22, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    I hop i went to the big day out with you it would be so interesting I like going some where fun.
    Sesalina

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  10. TheaMarch 28, 2011 at 2:57 PM

    Hi Mele, I enjoyed reading your blog post about your fun day out. I love going to the beach to when I go I have a picnic with my family.
    I love your detail on your picture, you made it look so realistic. It sounded like had heaps of fun with your cousins and you kept safe. Kapai! Keep up the good work!

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  11. GiannaMarch 29, 2011 at 10:02 AM

    Hi Mele i like your picture i also liked the amazing words you used i wish i went to big day out.

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  12. saronaMarch 29, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    hi Mele I really like your story about going to the beach with your family .I really like your picher and your writing about the beach .was it really cool at the beach tale me in my blog . I really like to come to the beach some time's with you .that was the coolest story I ever hered and the best picher I ever sow. you are the best frend I ever sow I'm so happy that I meat you when you wher little and you wher my best friend . god buy

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  13. James at room15March 30, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Hi Mele

    I like your writing about going to the beach.
    keep it up I love your writing it is so cool and amazing.
    from James

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  14. ShanikaApril 13, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Dear Mele I love your story about the beach, especially the part about playing in the sand. I have so much fun building sandcastles. You didn't say much about the water, so did you had fun swimming? My favourite beach is the one in Pt England, what's your favourite?

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